论现代诗的音乐性——兼论诗歌的技术性问题

现代诗歌自身主要存在两个方面的问题,一是诗歌精神的孱弱,二是诗歌技巧的退化。没有规矩不成方圆,没有原则、规范、法度、秩序就没有评判的标准,没有言说的依据,当然就难以体现出存在的合法性。中国现代诗的发展至少应遵循以下规范:一是诗意必须明晰,意境必须深邃;二是语言必须节约、凝练、精粹、讲究,成为"诗的语言";三是结构避免松散,必须紧凑;四是诗体形式和内部(精神)构成和谐,节奏突出,韵脚明显,韵律婉转,能诵能唱,音乐性强烈,具有内外兼具的冲击力。

On Musicality and Technicality of Modern Poetry

Problems of Modern poems include two aspects：one is fragility of poetic soul and another is regression of poetic skills.Without principles,codes,order and evidences,legality of existence cannot be embodied.The development of modern poetry should suggestively follow these rules：poetic topic should be clear and poetic imagery be profound;language should be elegant,economical,concise and succinct;structure should be tight rather than loose;the form of poetry accords with its main idea harmoniously with delicate rhythm,clear rhyme,strong musicality and impact from both inside and outside.