从里尔克《沉重的时刻》看译诗的用语与节奏

关于里尔克的名作《沉重的时刻》,著名翻译家梁宗岱、陈敬容和绿原分别有各自的翻译,从三位的译文可以看出:1)诗歌翻译中“出彩”之处往往在于关键字词的翻译;2)把握节奏感是诗歌翻译重要的环节,拉长与紧缩、句式与音节的变化须自然地“化入”翻译的过程;3)翻译现代诗歌必须顾及现代人的欣赏习惯。

A View of the Diction and Rhythm from the Poetry Translation of Rainer Maria Rilke's Ernste Stunde

Rainer Maria Rilke's Ernste Stunde,a celebrated work,is translated by Liang Zong-dai,Chen Jing-rong and Lu Yuan as the famous translators.In their translation,three points are made clear:(1) The particular accomplishment often lies in the translation.(2) It is an important link to have the sense of rhythm in poetry translation.Elongates and shrinks,the sentence type and the syllable changes must be naturally put into the translation process(3) It would be considered the modern people's appreciation custom for the translation of the modern poetry.