关于《沈园二首》的次序及异文问题

钱钟书《宋诗选注》在选录陆游的《沈园二首》时,将二诗的前后位置进行了调换,又将沈园非复旧池台一句中的非字改成了无字。这两处改动,很有可能是钱钟书有意沿袭了清人严长明《千首宋人绝句》中的改动,而严长明又当是本于周密《齐东野语》中的相关记载。二诗位置的前后置换,使原作结构更加完美;而非改为无,却使声音效果较原作略为逊色。

A Note on the Order and the Dissenting Words of the Two Poems on Shen's Garden

Qian Zhongshu changed the position of the two poems on Shen's garden written by Lu You as well as the word not into none,when he wrote an annotation to the anthology of Song dynasty.These two changes probably followed Yan Changming of Qing dynasty.and Yan Changming probably followed a famous scholar named Zhou Mi.These two minute changes made the original take on a new look.The former made the structure of the poem more perfect,and the latter made the works no better than the original in sound effect.